Last edited by Byakugan_Master; 08-12-2008 at 09:37 AM.
It'd help if we could see the raw pages that you were working from. That would allow for a better assessment.
I guess it's not too bad for a first attempt. You really need to work on getting your blacks blacker and your whites whiter. I'm seeing a lot of dirty spos within the white area and the blacks are not solid either. You should use the burn tool, set the mode to 'shadow' and set it to about 30 - 40% and burn those blacks. If you invert the entire page (Ctrl+I) you'll see just how dirty the white sections (that now appear black) are, and use the burn tool to get rid of them.
The typesetting was done well though, but I don't really like the font used for regular speech....best to have it all capitalized. Also, ensure that the words are centred within the bubble and don't touch the bubble's sides too much.
Hope this helps.