Naruto 401 Pages 16-17

**dct21** · 05-26-2008, 05:38 AM

**Kuszek** · 05-26-2008, 06:20 AM

Nice but I think that the shadows in the last picture are too far-away from the original txt

**dct21** · 05-26-2008, 07:43 AM

Originally Posted by Kuchcior

Nice but I think that the shadows in the last picture are too far-away from the original txt

i did that on purpose

**Kuszek** · 05-26-2008, 09:50 AM

I know but that was only my opinion

**damnz** · 05-26-2008, 12:45 PM

The back of Itachi on first and second panel of the first picture is just awesome, good job! Also the first panel of the second picture is really good. As Kuchcior said, maybe those text shadows are a bit too fare away from the original text, which makes it harder to read and a bit ugly. I think you should work on Sasuke's hair in last picture if you have some free time.

That's my opinion, anyway. Good job

**dct21** · 05-26-2008, 01:42 PM

Originally Posted by Kuchcior

I know but that was only my opinion

O.K
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Originally Posted by damnz

The back of Itachi on first and second panel of the first picture is just awesome, good job! Also the first panel of the second picture is really good. As Kuchcior said, maybe those text shadows are a bit too fare away from the original text, which makes it harder to read and a bit ugly. I think you should work on Sasuke's hair in last picture if you have some free time.

That's my opinion, anyway. Good job

thanks, it makes it look ugly,lol i when i did it i though it was kinda cool lookin,lol.