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    Naruto My stab at greys

    this is my first stab at greys learned how to do it here: http://senbonzakura.kageyoshi.net/20...ys-film-grain/ I focused mostly on greys. If there are thing wrong with it (Im sure there is) It's because I didnt worry about it as much as I did the greys.

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    not all blacks are really black, and it looks a bit blurry, other then that, youre good on the way of learning how to clean mangas.

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    Couldn't be fucked Archiel's Avatar
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    I'll only comment on the gray's. I'd suggest making the gray's lighter, and you just have to work more on redoing the lines, they're not that bad, but they could be thicker...or a better way to put it would be to say to make the lines more stronger and visible

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    The grey are a tad too dark, otherwise nice for the first time.

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    thanks I will try to do better(Naruto is not easy...)

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    Well...you've improved a lot since your first attempt, which is what cleaning is all about. With more practice, you'll get a lot better.
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    Couldn't be fucked Archiel's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Byakugan_Master View Post
    thanks I will try to do better(Naruto is not easy...)
    Grey's unfortunately were never meant to be easy, so if you think it's taking you too long to do it then don't worry, since they do take a while...

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