Trying my best to translate while waiting for the good scans to come out. Let it be said that I've never tried to fully translate a chapter for myself or for others, so at best, my translation is unreliable.
That said, I want to point out that I hate...I HATE the way Shawlong talks.
Ichigo: Wha...What was that?
GJ: Desugaron (reading it directly. Not sure what the Kanji is).
GJ: My ultimate/strongest technique.
Pg. 8 - Flashback
Shawlong: "Give up", did you say?"
Ilfort (I think is saying this): You understand that we have not become Vastolorde.
We have not felt our strength increase after eating in excess of a 1000 hollows. (not sure on translation)
Today's prey was the 3000th. We knew [eating] any more [than this] is useless.
GJ: Doesn't matter. Give up and you'll die a dog's death. I'll keep going.
Shawlong: No matter. However, if you're going...
Shawlong: ...eat us!
-- Eating a part of the body from the same family will stop the continuing of evolution. (i think...again!)
Shawlong: It's too late for D-Roy to become a Vastolorde. This is something I already know.
Shawlong: Our evolution will end here.
Shawlong: I said I understood that already. This is perhaps our only time to become Vastolorde. Possibly furthermore, from the past we understand this. <-- huge amount of guessing
**EDIT: I WAS TOTALLY WRONG HERE! :O**
Shawlong: In this brief moment of our Hollow existence, we are Adjuchas. You continue to lead us. (i think) We will continue to feed, Grimmjaw. **EDIT: I was wrong here too!**
Pg. 11 - Flashback ends (FINALLY! *dies*)
GJ: HAHAHAHAHHAHA! It's over, Kurosaki!
GJ: You lost to me!!!!
- Anyone (I'm guessing) who is a coward, is fine. I'll devour you (?)
- Look at my flesh
GJ: I...I AM KING!
Ichigo: You haven't won anything....
GJ: What's that?
Ichigo: What you said before...It's...It's my turn to start too.
Ichigo: It's exactly what you said. I came here to fight with you.
Ichigo: I came here to beat you, Grimmjaw!!!
Ichigo: I'll beat you!
Ichigo: I'll beat Ulquiorra! I'll beat Aizen! And Rukia, Chad, Ishida, Renji, Inoue...I'll return home with all of them. You are the only person...
Ichigo: ...I will NEVER lose to, Grimmjaw!
Wow. 2 hours of translating this chapter. Other than the fact that the flashback took 1.5 hours (damn Shawlong), it wasn't so bad to figure out.
My opinion: It's not THAT bad of a chapter...provides a good amount of backstory for GJ. Didn't like the Victory By Pure Will part though.
Hmm...in the 2 hours I spent translating, Binktopia released their version. Ah whatev. I'll leave mine up to see how close I was.
**EDIT: Binktopia has far more of an artistic flair than I do. Bah. I'm tame.**