My manga(incomplete)

[Nashayla]

Hi!
I am currently working on manga named Guardians and I am 100% an amateur. I only do this in my spare time and because I love fantasy and love to to draw. The first page of the prologue is done. English is not my mother tongue so there might be some grammar errors! ATM the grammar is being corrected by a Scottish friend but seems like he does not have much spare time so that is gonna take a looong time before it is corrected so if there is any native speaker who would want to help me in correcting the grammar in my story, I would be really happy, you can PM me if you are interested. I gladly take critism in order to make the manga even better. For the tones and highlights I use manga studio EX4.0. Please enjoy!

Manga/anime inspiration

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Yu-Gi-Oh, Pandora Hearts, 07 Ghost, Id, Yureka, Tactics, Gundam00, The Sacred Blacksmith, D. Gray-Man, Gintama, The Legend of The Legendary Heroes, Fairy Tail, +C: Sword and Cornett, Diamond no Ace, T.R.A.P., .All .//Hack series, Witch Hunter, The Breaker, Izayakaku, Hitman Reborn, 1/2 Prince, Hunter X Hunter(+Greed Island)

Genre

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Fantasy, horror, supernatural, mystery, comedy, drama, shounen, seinen, action, adventure, tragedy.

Synopsis

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The human world is divided into four parts, Labunaagan, Kahrlin, Sanszin, Amenale. In this world magic is born by the soul of dead creature. Abbadon, an Angel of Penalty rebelled against God and ascended to the human world. The Holy Saint, Ariel was send to the human world to eradicate wars. Ambriel, an angel is send to the human world in order to protect The Holy Saint. Abbadon, the Angel of Penalty is in search of the Holy Saint in order to obtain the ultimate magic. Why will an angel gather magic?
Wisely, a boy with an unknown past is found homeless in Labunagaan. He has a strangely eye which keeps bleeding whenever he feels really sick. Reaper, an unknown creature which resides within him, hates the humans
At the Selection Day Wisely is chosen by two Black Guardians and thereafter journeys to the Sacred Land in order to practice magic. Strange things starts occurring and students disappears into the thin air without a trace. Wisely starts doubting the Sacred Land and he discovers the cruel truth bit by bit in which the humans are unable to see. One day he gets in contact with a trapped Spirit King and decides to learn about his own past. In order to unravel the mystery of his own past, he embarks on a long journey through all three countries with his accompanies, Rynart his best friend, Odah his guardian and Alma, Prince of Labunaagan. In Labunagaan they encounter hardships and sorrow. When Wisely visits the Tower of Lorrin he gets flashback of the past event that has happened in the tower. Why is Wisely able to see something which is supposed to be hidden? Is this a missing piece of Wisely's memories? On their journey they encounter a mysterious man with long silver hair, named Sin. Even though Odah disagrees Sin joins their party. In the ruins of the Prayers in Amenale, Wisely accidentally steps on a Heavenly Symbol which immediately starts a chain reaction throughout the world. The Heavenly Symbols have been activated and Sin shows his true self. Now Wisely and his party must save the human world from Dooms Day. Journey into a world of magic and unknown creatures beyond your imagination.

(when reading the manga please read from right to left, the Japanese way)
The manga: Prologue, first page

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Bigger version:
http://www.pocketonline.net/g2engine...ns+new0002.jpg


Here is character design

http://www.crunchyroll.com/showphotoalbum?id=12260505