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    Veni Vidi Vicious viciousds's Avatar
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    Random Sketch

    Here's a random sketch i drew that's kinda based off of Suzuka from Outlaw Star. I'm kinda new to this so if you could give me some tips on how to clean up the image and maybe add in some color using photoshop or similar programs, that would be great.


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    Here's a better version of the same picture. I just went over the lines with a regular ballpoint pen. I'm still open for suggestions if anyone has any

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    Good job on the details especially in the sword.

    Maybe it will look even better his right arm wasn't too long in comparison to left and the rest of the body. Also you maybe you should make the hands bigger.

    Other than that the pic looks very nice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vizaldo View Post
    Good job on the details especially in the sword.

    Maybe it will look even better his right arm wasn't too long in comparison to left and the rest of the body. Also you maybe you should make the hands bigger.

    Other than that the pic looks very nice.
    Thanks for the advice. Btw, the drawing is supposed to be of a girl. i guess i should have made the chest bigger or something to emphasize that lol also, for the right arm, i was trying to make the sleeve drop below the arm, but i guess it makes the arm look too long.

    Here's a very quick and not-so-good color pic done with photoshop
    Last edited by viciousds; 03-04-2009 at 09:49 PM.

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    its nice, she looks like n old women though

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    Here's another random drawing I did. I didn't put in as much detail, but i tried to at least get the proportions right. hopefully, it's in some ways better than the other pic

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    Last edited by ImotoChan; 03-10-2009 at 02:46 AM. Reason: Huge image is huge :3 Spoiler tag'd

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    I know i'm probably destroying this thread, but here's another one i drew. I think it looks really cool, but what do you think?

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    Last edited by viciousds; 03-17-2009 at 03:39 PM.

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    wow i wish i could draw like that great job dude. keep it up

    Soon the world will see true pain...and everyone will know who their god is.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pein's Rebirth View Post
    wow i wish i could draw like that great job dude. keep it up
    thanks. i'm not that good compared to other people on here, but i'm trying to get better.

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    I'm not good at all at drawing and coloring myself, but here are some comments:

    1. As dct said the first pic looks like an old woman. Probably because of the lips.
    2. Your sketches are good (I like the detail on the swords), but for some reason the colours don't live up to them. They seem a bit flat.

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