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  1. 03-06-2009, 11:10 PM #1
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    First Clean

    Hey everyone this is my first clean!
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    raw:
    Spoiler!


    Cleaned:


    Naruto 434 Page 14
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  2. 03-07-2009, 09:44 AM #2
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    You're the guy from #cleaners yesterday, right?
    Meh, this time I had to take a look I like how you saved all the details,
    and didn't use filters too much - all I'd do is redo the white lines (like on clothes etc)
    and also redo the borders, else its a nice clean, but I can't really rate your skills, since
    this page has no grays on it. Grays are the actual problem for cleaners...
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  3. 03-07-2009, 11:07 AM #3
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    can you get me a page with grays on it so i can try?
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  4. 03-07-2009, 11:09 AM #4
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    Mangahelpers is down I think, but if you want grays there are raws of D Gray-Man (latest is 179) there. I'm regretting trying to clean D Gray-man as my first attempt.
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  5. 03-07-2009, 11:11 AM #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by kuroihikari View Post
    Mangahelpers is down I think, but if you want grays there are raws of D Gray-Man (latest is 179) there. I'm regretting trying to clean D Gray-man as my first attempt.
    uhm are you telling me they have grays? or what lol.
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  6. 03-07-2009, 11:17 AM #6
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    D. Gray-Man has a load of grays. . The title is so apropos.
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  7. 03-07-2009, 02:15 PM #7
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    Nah, try easy grays first...
    I'm sure Naruto 434 too had grays, don't you have that raw anymore?

    All possible raws are on http://www.raw-paradise.com/ too.
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  8. 03-09-2009, 04:26 AM #8
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    I remember you from #cleaners ^^
    who want to spend lots of time doing mag raws instead of tanko. XD

    anyway, first panel's bubble, you used wrong settings for typeset tool.
    it should be smooth instead of none or whatever.
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  9. 03-09-2009, 05:05 AM #9
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