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    Post I refuse to die! (fanfic)

    Hiya,

    I will be making a fanfic storie called "I refuse to die!"...

    It will be a based on a highschool boy by the age of 17, he has a disease which makes his body weaker and weaker as the time passes... his fate is already decided, he will die in 8 months from when the story starts... there's nothing the doctors can do to resque him from his suffer...
    He already got the option to kill himself in a legimet way, because of his suffer...
    But, he declined, he refuses to let fate decide his death..

    In person he is a very gentle guy, but his weak body causes him not being accepted by most people...

    He himself is a very brilliant guy, he always gets the best grades of school, and because of that is being bullied by a group of guys on school.

    What people don't know is "how intelligent he is", he is obsessed with a myth (i created my own myth.. just to let you know), of a demon race that once habited Japan...
    There is nothing but stories known about these myths...

    When he was a child he found a scroll regarding these legends, now he is trying to solve the myth and manipulate his body with the remains of the demon race, inorder to survive by his desease and to get a stronger body...
    (nobody knows that he posseses this scroll)

    There also is a second main character, it's a beautyful girl who was raised by the japanese army since she was found during a mission, she has recieved a gift, which is her own freedom to live in human society.

    She is being attended to his school and will play a big part in the plot.

    (ps. i'd like to draw examples, but i dont have a tablet, i do have a scanner, so i might sometimes add images i drew for the storyline).
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    Please tell me what you think of the summary regarding the storyline so far.

    Tips, ideas, suggestions, anything is accepted, but please don't post useless replies.
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    Interesting, very very interesting. I look forward to some of the pics.


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    Quote Originally Posted by ChaosRising View Post
    Interesting, very very interesting. I look forward to some of the pics.
    thanks ^^, the storie isnt fully thought out yet, i still am thinking on the whole plot.. i was hoping for suggestions and ideas and to add to make the story more interesting to people..

    i still have another problem, i still can't really decide a good personality for the female main character...

    oh and, yes i might steal ideas from other mangas

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    Lmao, all art and literature is theft from previous writers ideas and work. The skill is in making it your own and not a blatant act of plagiary.

    Seems like he may end up some kind of Oni by the time he acquires his abilities. I guess how he uses those powers will dictate if he does or not. As far as the girl goes, since she was raised by the Army, how about making her a whiz with mechanical $hit, kind of like Bulma in DBZ? A girl like that comes in handy.


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    Quote Originally Posted by ChaosRising View Post
    Lmao, all art and literature is theft from previous writers ideas and work. The skill is in making it your own and not a blatant act of plagiary.

    Seems like he may end up some kind of Oni by the time he acquires his abilities. I guess how he uses those powers will dictate if he does or not. As far as the girl goes, since she was raised by the Army, how about making her a whiz with mechanical , kind of like Bulma in DBZ? A girl like that comes in handy.
    Yea, i already planned she was an expert on a few things like mechanics... but she also is a very good fighter.. however i need to find a personality that fits.. But i don't actually want her to be a whizkid...

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    yeah ur ideas are interesting. maybe u could give her that winry personality i dont know


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    Quote Originally Posted by gdupninja View Post
    yeah ur ideas are interesting. maybe u could give her that winry personality i dont know
    hm.. im thinking on making her careing, lively and curious, not lively as in the standard "SHOUTING TROUBLECAUSING ANNOYING GIRL" like alot of animes and manga's have...

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    i didnt read the previous post when i put that up. care giving , livly and curius sounds good
    . good luck thinking about it


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    Quote Originally Posted by gdupninja View Post
    i didnt read the previous post when i put that up. care giving , livly and curius sounds good
    . good luck thinking about it
    thanks ,

    there will come some more characters involving the storie, but if i had to discuss them all, then it would take ages...

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    Quote Originally Posted by yuugaoambu View Post
    She could be caring as Hinata, curious as Ino, and smart as Bulma+Shika together, but it would be hilarious if she was also as bossy as Temari.
    i like the bossy side, it fits a military girl though

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